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    [Sajak] Hari Yang Pertama

    dua-kosong-satu-dua menutup jendela
    waktu yang berlari tidak terasa
    harapan tertinggal sia-sia
    juga impian sedikit terlaksana
    kadang getir datang menyapa
    tidak terlupa nikmat bahagia
    jadi pedoman bila datang masa


    dua-ribu-tiga-belas mengetuk pintu
    azam lama kini azam baru
    agar tabah menempuh liku
    moga kuat melawan nafsu
    ya Tuhan beri lagi waktu
    jadi insan seperti Kau mahu


    akhir izinkan kata pengulas
    lisan dan laku yang terbabas
    biarpun jelas biarpun sekilas
    ampun maaf mohon penuh ikhlas
    moga jumpa lagi tahun empat-belas





    hari 1, 2013
    kok lanas, kelantan
    You'll Never Walk Alone

    "If you can't support us when we lose or draw, don't support us when we win." -Bill Shankly-

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    xde idea aku nak balas sajak atoq nie

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    Saya balas yang arif~

    dua puluh tiga belas membuka tirai
    waktu berjalan seakan berlari
    harapan yg sia-sia seakan memberi
    impian terlaksana umpama mmpi
    getir yang datang memberi erti
    nikmat bahagia mengisi sepi
    pedoman diri di masa nanti~

    ntah apa la lolly mengarut nih~
    When life gives you a hundred reasons to cry,
    show life that
    you have a thousand reasons to smile.


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    kalo aku nk nyanyi bleh x? enjit enjit semut sapa sakit naik atas enjit enjit semut sapa sakit naik atas


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    Quote Originally Posted by lolly lilly View Post
    Saya balas yang arif~

    dua puluh tiga belas membuka tirai
    semangat benor lolly nak balas sajak tersebut. sampai dua ribu tiga belas pun jadi dua puluh tiga belas. apekebenda kah itu??

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    Quote Originally Posted by supernova View Post
    semangat benor lolly nak balas sajak tersebut. sampai dua ribu tiga belas pun jadi dua puluh tiga belas. apekebenda kah itu??
    betul jugak dua puluh tiga belas (2013) tu. macam dua puluh dua puluh (2020).

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    rasanya maksud lolly lilly tu 20-13
    You'll Never Walk Alone

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    Quote Originally Posted by atoq View Post
    rasanya maksud lolly lilly tu 20-13
    Quote Originally Posted by the_magician View Post
    betul jugak dua puluh tiga belas (2013) tu. macam dua puluh dua puluh (2020).
    aiseh. setelah diperhati.. baru perasan. alamak haii.. malu nyaaaaa !!!

    *nyorok dalam lemari kasut*

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    brsajak sajak plak atoq ni..

    depa balas ~

    Row, row, row your boat,
    Gently down the stream.
    Merrily, merrily, merrily, merrily,
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